All Comments on 'Insubordination'

Great! Witty dialogue. Chacterization short and to the point. Thank you!

...again.

This has your trademark sharp, witty dialogue and breathtakingly simple plots.

I still read "Fifth Place" from time to time.

Thanks muchly.

I enjoyed this. Fun to find a good read. Look forward to more

Although by itself it would be a bit short for even a novella. Like the other readers, liked the dialog, the wit, a well conceived and put together story. As a reader of lots of crime/mystery stories, all I can say is: Write ON!

As others have said, good dialog and a nice, fast paced story. Look forward to more of it.

You are without a doubt my favor author here at Lit.

First it's obvious that your from the PHILLY area and so am I.

Second as somebody who had a previous career as a private investigator I really enjoyed this story.

Third the dialog in the story borders on being spectacular.... As good as something you would read in a Robert B Parker novel.

I cannot wait to read your novel.

You Buggest fan Harry in VA.

Fascinating plot and great dialogue. You always have

produced fine stories!

I enjoyed this one very much. Thank you author.

PLEASE continue. It's been months now.....MORE..may I have some more Please?

now some of the super sleuths can look over their pinnacles, Smitty has arrived, TK U MLJ LV NV

happened to your book, "Circumstantial Evidence?"

I found it.

Excellent character development, attention to detail, and continuity. I have a copy of "circumstantial evidence" and it is equal if not better for the fact that it is novel length. I hope Mr. RP such is still actively writing but I've not seen anything from him in the recent past. I will, however, continue to hope to see more this talented storyteller.

I enjoyed this great story very much. I figured out on my own that you are an excellent writer, but to have HarryVa gushing like a ten year old girl is astonishing.

But not what I read Literotica for.

The dog that didn't bark? Seriously? Is there a more trite trope?