All Comments on 'Intemperate Acquaintances'

Now this is talent!

Even without a working knowledge of NOES, HALLOWEEN and HELLRAISER this is nothing short of creative brilliance. I don't think I have read any author on this or any other site has your command of the English language. Your description of Jenny, her room and her friends is awesomely detailed.

Your literacy far exceds the expectations of this site. To say this was very good is almost insulting.

This is a fantastic combination of erotica and horror. Your use of the two in this manner is superb. As a fan of horror and especially Freddy/Jason/etc. you have created a stimulating combination of pleasure and pain. Please, write more.

Gave you a five, cause you have talent...but dang if I have nightmares tonight, Imma send you a complaining email, lol. This was really freaky. But hey, I read the warnings, I chose to forge on...heh, so I'm not always so wise at times. Not something a reader is gonna instantly forget. Wanders off to bed and my nightmares....