All Comments on 'Intended Ch. 11'

Way to go Veba! I'm so glad she had a happy ending -- of sorts, at least. Nice job!

I absolutely loved this story. It was fantastic. I think I'm happier with Veba taking him out. I was hooked from part one. It was truly a pleasure to read this.

I enjoyed this chapter by chapter. Each drew me back to read the next.

I LOVED THIS! great novel from start to end it was really kool wish there could be a sequel ;) luv to read more about veba and letan! those two would be very interesting xx

Yes, a sequel PLEASE! Very good story!

This is a beautiful story thankyou very much : )

This was a beautiful story.

I hope you continue to write this is one of the best I have ever read also where did you study primitive tribes at that was spot on

really entertaining, well written, hot story!

Cheers

wow its very hard to believe this is your first writing. beautiful story, plots, twists and ending!

Lovely story but reads just like The Earth Children Series by Jean Auel. Her main characters are Ayla and Jondalar. If you say this is your original work, please read those and see how very similar they are.