by Funkydrummer
I enjoyed every installment, I hope there's more. I almost jumped out my skin when you described the Naghra, I would have screamed. Lol! Thanks Funkydrummer!
This one was a lot of fun, I loved Desiree's reaction to the Naghra. Or rather, her controlling her reaction. Well done. :)
I will wait expectantly for the next installment. Good things come to those that wait.
awesome awesome awesome......why do we have to wait so long for the next chapter? Can't wait to see/hear what the next alien will do....
Very nice chapter. I think that you should maybe describe how exactly this creature is snake like....
but I believe I found a typo. Near the end it says 'I resemble..". But I believe you meant to say I resent...
So Maybe re phrase that sentence to make it more clear. Thanks.
Just thought I'd let you know that phrase was deliberate; our Naghra has a dry sense of humour.
Thank you very much for all your helpful comments. They're most appreciated. Currently working on Chapter #9, but it keeps growing on me! :P
"She bit her lower lip, the gentle foothills of arousal turning into that steep climb towards climax."
Excellent erotic prose! What I deeply enjoy about this series and your writing in general is it's quality, attention to detail and originality. It's difficult for me to loose myself in a story if I have to stumble grammatical errors and rewrite terrible phrasing and descriptions in my head as I go. Not so here; your world is lush, vivid, erotic and satisfying - without being repetitive, juvenile or full of cliches.
Keep up the good work. :)
I loved this chapter, from the very beginning to the very end. I also cracked up laughing when Desiree found out that her guest got a hangover from her vaginal fluids.
I am looking forwartd to the next chapter, keep up the good work.
I share the Naghra's quirk that cunning linguistics
on my wife was always intoxicating for me.
That was awesome. I especially loved the part about the Naghra getting junk off pussy juice. LMBO.