by Funkydrummer
Loved this chapter. Was quite a wait but well worth it. I can hardly wait for your next chapter!
Ive got to say i love this series. That was one heck of a wait, but well worth the content. I can hardly wait for the next one!
I read up to chapter 10 previously and was disappointed when you hadn't updated and now you've updated twice and it's great. By far one of the best sci-fi stories on lit.com and one of the better overall. I can't wait to see what happens in your next installment. I would love to see more interaction between Veronica and Desiree though. thanks for a great read and i'll be waiting on the edge of my seat for future chapters.
That was hot. I really enjoyed this chapter in what is also my favorite series on Literotica.
so glad that you posted another chapter. this story is my favorite sci-fi story on this site! keep 'em comin!
Started reading these when you first started the series and loved them and so happy to see you return! Keep it up, but more frequently!
you have a wonderful way of writing and an amazing creative imagination. thanks for sharing with us, looking forward to re reading your stories and reading any new ones.
I just read the entire story (forgot to sleep again, damn it) it's amazing, Glad you picked it up again, Hope the next part won't take as long (;
Congratulations on one of the best stories, ever!
Would LOVE to see it continue.
Wow!
I loved this story and the series as a whole!
Reading more with Desirée and Cyraena would be great! *Argh, imagination is running wild right now*
Hope to read more of your work soon!
(pun definitely intended)
I've been struggling with this one - a few random plot threads coming together - but I hopefully will have Chapter 13 up by the end of the year. This one will be more plot-heavy but should have some sexy time as well. Thanks for all your kind comments and also for your patience.
Cheers. :)
One of the best stories (not only erotica) I've read in a long time. Imaginative, very hot and sometimes surprising sex scenes, a likeable heroine and all around a joy to read.
I love this series so much and I would love to read more of her sexual adventures. I'm a girl and this is by far my favorite series. It's not only erotic, but a really good read!