All Comments on 'Intern Lust'

Great story and well done. My only problem was I had a hard time keeping the characters straight. You seldom indicated who was talking so I did not know if it was Jen or her boss (did the boss even have a name?) saying or doing something. Rather most of the references were to "she" -which "she" was it?

The way this story was written is confusing

Ignore them. I thought the story was beautiful!

Orpheum69