All Comments on 'Interview Ch. 01'

This story is professionally written and so hot I got an instant blue steel erection. I will be looking forward to more from Lotus Flower. I think I'm in love!

Nice writing but I couldn't help feeling disappointed over the fact that you followed every non-consent 'cliche'. There was nothing unique about the way the man and woman were behaving/interacting, it was the same old thing that usually is played out in roleplays.

I do agree with the critique that the story is cliched. It's almost impossible not to use them, since the whole idea of nonconsensual fantasies are sort of a cliche. My other story (I've been told) is less cliched, so perhaps you should check that out.

As for the unconditional positive comments, thanks... those are certainly nice to hear.

Am definitely working on more. Hopefully less cliched.

god dam mate you are a good writer