All Comments on 'Interview with Tentacle Demon Ch. 09'

by PervOtaku

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DoctimeDoctimeover 10 years ago
Way too short

Come on put a little "meat" into the story. This was way too much wham bam!

Morrigan_Morrigan_over 10 years ago

Good chapter:) And I guess that threesome doesn't mean two males and a female?:)

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Love this story!

But I agree. More than one page at a time please, it's so interesting and a good stroke story too

DecadentdessertDecadentdessertover 10 years ago

Love It! Make it a bit longer 2 or 3 pages. Xmas is coming up consider it your gift to us. LOL!

purpledragonflypurpledragonflyover 10 years ago
hm

my favorite parts of your writing are actually the non-sex bits. :/ You write your characters rather well outside of sex, and then during sex it all goes kind of flat and bland.

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