All Comments on 'Intimate Strangers on a Train'

Unusual story line. Nicely done.

Delightful.

learn to use them, they are for speaking parts, not what is happening and when you start a new paragraph

If you read the story you would realise the quotation marks have been used properly. He is whispering into her ear !!

P.s Apart from the comment from "Anonymous" I loved it ~ very erotic x

thank you. This was beautifully written and a very erotic story. A part of me wants to read more of their story but the other part says stop right here and enjoy the tingles going up and down my spine.

More, please!