All Comments on 'Into the Blue Ch. 01'

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papagrizpapagrizover 12 years ago
IT WAS NICE WHILE IT LASTED

but then your story died. Did your typewriter/computer run out of ink or what. Sorry can't give you a vote but would like to see another couple of chapters next time.

Phantom1945Phantom1945over 12 years ago
Great start!

Please write more in this series. Boats, islands, hot women... what more could you ask?

egentegentover 10 years ago
Left wanting more

I enjoyed this story very much. I has so much mystery and potential. Hope that you some time in the future decide to come back and add some more chapters.

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