by _Stormy_
Short but intense introduction to what looks to be a very good story.
Really good beginning. And now I'm waiting patiently for the next part. Nice job.
It's a good thing I'm a girl and I don't get blue balls, but seriously.... I was sooooooo looking forward to more! Can't wait to read another chapter so finish soon! :)
Good start to your story. A little short though. Hoping your future chapters are longer. Thank you for writing.