All Comments on 'Into the Garden Ch. 25-27'

this chapter, I thought that it would be boring with not enough tension (cold weather wouldn't do it---this reader is from the Midwest), but CarliePlum, thank you, the tension was just right, working well to ground the story in reality AND to solidify the relationship between daughter and dad. Again,. thanks for a fine story that I hope will significantly alter the way people look at Literotica's Interracial category forever!

To the writer, I did not provide any comments on the various section, but I rated each submission. Now I just want to this was an excellent written story that flowed very very well. I do not write very well, but I do know what I enjoy reading and this story was very captivating and kept me looking forward to the next chapter. Thank you very much.

I really enjoy reading this story. The pace was quick and there was the proper amount of tention to keep me focus. Lindy and Sam were such a charming couple. However I do feel the wrap up to this story was rather quick. I would have like to have read more about John Sr. Also to have read more about the fall out with Chip and Belinda's mom. With that said , this story was truely engaging and pleasure to read. I look foward to reading more of your stories.

The characters are so real- kept me smiling though their love story;)

Your work is under-rated. It should be a 4.6 story at least

Less than "1".

This is the most well written book I’ve read on this site and the first one I’ve left a comment for.