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by Msmiler

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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Needs a lot of work

You are aloud to say vagina and fuck . please get a editor

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

I would suggest checking grammar... And watching what tense you are in. Also vagina and boobs... there are plenty of slang terms to use instead.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Good Advise

Don't be discouraged by criticism. Follow their advice and you will improve. Keep writing.

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