All Comments on 'Into the Woods'

A great start. I can't wait to see where you go with this. You have me hooked with one short page so 5 stars from the start. Hope you post the next chapter soon and that it is longer. I'm greedy that way when I find a story I like. :-) ~K.

Great start. Keep on going.

this story was very interesting

You got me hooked! I definitely want to know what happens next!!!!!!!!!!!!

Really great start, you write so well. Looking forward to what you come up with! :)

I like the story,,,or page to be exact...a bit longer to make a real chapter and its super good...

Excellent start to a story! My only suggestion about technical stuff is to watch out for places to use commas. For example, the line: God I think pushing my head into a rock willing this desire to go away. It would be much easier to read and understand if it was written like: "God," I think, pushing my head into a rock, willing this desire to go away.

Keep up the good work!