All Comments on 'Into the Woods Ch. 04'

The story is good but extremely short. Keep up the good work and I hope you increase each chapter's length.

Interesting read and i'd like to read more please. Thanks

Eagerly waiting for the next one :-))

All of your chapters are extremely short, and it's really frustrating.

Good writing,just way too short to be called a chapter,,,

That was good, but too short

Please update quickly

Just founf this one and Im hooked I will be checking back often to read more please update and and write longer chapters I'm very interestinterested I have to what comes next

I know this story is old, but I feel like there's such a change in thi chapter, from a bold 80yo hunter to a whiny child who insults his mate's art skill, whines about the search for her (as if his mate isn't worth the effort?), and sits in his underwear playing XBox like a sullen teenager. Hard to root for him with this behavior.