All Comments on 'Intrepid Pawns Ch. 01'

It sounds like you're taking a slight change of direction by making a definite end for this series. I like the sound of this, and am looking forwards to the consequences :)

Just in case there's any confusion, this will not affect stories like Sea Slimes and Evergreen Forest, which will continue soon. I've been wanting to tell a few stories about other characters, though, and I figured Snatch and Claire deserved a break!

Seems like you've put together a nice little cast of characters. It's nice that you're getting some decent establishment for them. I hope this continues, I'm really enjoying it :)

I like how this has started out and look forward to reading more. I only have one complaint which should be seen as a compliment, I don't want to stop reading but the chapters are always so short!!

I'm always checking to see if you've posted anything new and am glad to hear you have more coming. Can't wait to read them!!

I always like to see you dive into something ne and expand he universe, and I cannot wait to see where these people end up... Fantastic work as usual!

An excellent beginning.