All Comments on 'Introduction to the Mile High Club'

by naughty_madeleine_86

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AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

Great story...good build up. Write about some more of your adventures.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Horny wet adventures

Loved this story. Made me so wet and horny. I go on a lot of business trips and this is a wild fantasy. So hot.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Wanting more

I would love to read more about some of your other adventures.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Very well done!

Thoroughly enjoyed your story. Very well done, built anticipation, good character development even with secondary figures. I look forward to reading more of your stories. Thanks for sharing!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Red hot

Wonderful, oh that it was me eating and fucking your juicy fucking cunt. Cunt lapping sex maniac uk.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
nice

Well written and hot. My wife also loved it

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Lovely story - needs proofing and editing

Nice first try. I would recommend that you use the skills of an English language editor, as this reader's enjoyment of an excellent story was disrupted by grammar errors and syntax.

Keep writing!

naughty_madeleine_86naughty_madeleine_86over 7 years agoAuthor
Thank you.

A kind thank you to the great number of readers and especially those who voted and left a comment. It is a great boost to continue writing some of my encounters as flight attendant. As well an incentive to pay attention to my english writing. I have therefore submitted an edited version of this story to correct some spelling and grammar mistakes. It should be accepted and replaced by Lit in the coming few days, so hold on and please check later for this and hopefully soon a new story as well. X - Madeleine

spinningwheels2spinningwheels2over 7 years ago
Yay!

Madeleine... so good!!!

You write really well ... i hope this becomes a multi-part series! I might try to contact you here... maybe we can write something together. :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
thank you

Good story, thank you for sharing your fantasies

surrender_mesurrender_meover 7 years ago
Excellent

Great writing, super erotic and looking forward to your next story.

David251David251over 7 years ago
More, please!

I love the pace of your story...lots of enticing detail. I could see it all in my mind's eye.

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