by naughty_madeleine_86
Loved this story. Made me so wet and horny. I go on a lot of business trips and this is a wild fantasy. So hot.
Thoroughly enjoyed your story. Very well done, built anticipation, good character development even with secondary figures. I look forward to reading more of your stories. Thanks for sharing!
Wonderful, oh that it was me eating and fucking your juicy fucking cunt. Cunt lapping sex maniac uk.
Nice first try. I would recommend that you use the skills of an English language editor, as this reader's enjoyment of an excellent story was disrupted by grammar errors and syntax.
Keep writing!
A kind thank you to the great number of readers and especially those who voted and left a comment. It is a great boost to continue writing some of my encounters as flight attendant. As well an incentive to pay attention to my english writing. I have therefore submitted an edited version of this story to correct some spelling and grammar mistakes. It should be accepted and replaced by Lit in the coming few days, so hold on and please check later for this and hopefully soon a new story as well. X - Madeleine
Madeleine... so good!!!
You write really well ... i hope this becomes a multi-part series! I might try to contact you here... maybe we can write something together. :)
Great writing, super erotic and looking forward to your next story.
I love the pace of your story...lots of enticing detail. I could see it all in my mind's eye.