All Comments on 'Introspections'

Hope to read more soon!

i like your story hope she stays the way she is and he might be nicer then the others but he is just as bad he bought her i know this is non con and I love reading them I just wish in these stories that the guys would say that they knows its wrong for what they are doing even if they don't let them go hope that makes sense hope you update soon

Really great so far I hate when theyre just sadistic buttheads...please write more dont leave me hanging

I have read a lot of storys on here and this one almost made me cry. Not in sadness tho. I found it hard to read at first but as it continued i was hooked. I'm not usually intrested in non con but once the feelings from him came through it seemed more in my intersts. Also her stubbornness is kinda endearing.

He assumes her to be docile. The first time (and she had plenty of chances) she stands in front of him, why not knee him in the balls? He goes down and she breaks a chair over his head and he's out cold. Plenty of time to tie him up and then explore the house, find the car keys or a phone and this whole thing is over. He's in prison for the rest of his life and the Police are looking for the men that took her in the first place. This is a typical scenario for stories like this one. Authors never seem to think about the possibility that a woman, any woman, is more than capable of putting a single man down and out. And it doesn't take much. So this whole story was both implausible and unbelievable. 1 star.

It seems like you are looking for it all, dominance and kidnapping, but also careful respect and support. I don't really get it.

Thanks for all feedback, positive or negative. I don't mind if you hate it, though if you do I'd find it helpful if you let me know why! While I won't give any spoilers I will say this piece is based in large part on my personal introspections as I explore my own sense of sexuality. A common thread in my personal experience has been that of cognitive dissonance and the lack of absolutes in human behaviors and motivations so vacillating thoughts, feelings and actions from both of the characters are intentional and I hope not completely unbelievable. The human existence would certainly be easier if everyone's intentions were clear and behaviors were always consistent with objectives, but I suspect it would make life, as well as fiction, rather boring. As to why she didn't knee him in the gonads and steal the car keys, I assure you she is wondering the same thing right about now. 😉

It's always rape, if she's a prisoner, where consent comes from survival instincts or brainwashing.

Lovely story. Love the balanced between reluctance and desire, stubbornness and nervousness... The thinly veiled power dynamic adds so much to it. Reminds me, only partially, of the Stockholm syndrome, if you ve heard of it- it may even add to your larger story, that I am already looking forward to read!

Wonderful nuanced beginning -- stories of taming a spitfire are lacking around her, please do continue.

Please continue, seriously one of the best beginnings I've seen. This could go a long way.

i like this story and non con and know I have more chapters to read so im hopeful that she asks him how he thinks its alright to buy her and keep her ect I guess hope she does cause you don't see that to often where the girl does ask that and I hope she don't give in to easy like most stories have them do