All Comments on 'Intruder Ch. 03'

a chapter 4 and a chapter 5 and a chapter 6...etc...

love this story...but answer her questions, who is this guy, why her, how many others, when will he leave, will he just go and not be in her or his child's life, or is this a sick breeding program for money where he impregnats 2 or more women a year and he takes the baby to sell on a blackmarket earning $50,000. each, even with overheads what he clears over 60,000 to 130,000. a year???? Please continue this story the possiblities are endless, including that stupid HEA bullshit. Please keep going....Sir!

I am truly enjoying this series. Please continue to write, I want to read more!

Well thought out and well written and very good!!

Continue with the story ! I love it

Don't stop!!!!

She is being raped by Liam Niessen!

Oh, you must continue this!

Rape 1 She doesn't do anything like rape kit, police report. Come On.

Rape 2 and 3 are because she didn't take action, and now she is becoming a Sub to asshole who has raped her several time. We know the intent to get her pregnant as a

Nurse this would not be the case. Come On. Your story is really reaching and definitely not that good. Don't be mad I quess I am not into rape and sub.

if you are not in to rape and sub...per you...what are you doing in noncon/reluct???

try romance or coupling...

more!!!

Yes, please write 4!

I think it would be great to continue this up until she's actually pregnant

Can't wait to read chapter 4...and hopefully many more after that. Please don't make us wait too long for the next installment.

FORGET CHAPTER 4 GIVE ME CHAPTER 8

I do agree that it's a little far fetched, but it's still great and the storyline makes it even better. Please continue

More please! Great story.

Very sexy and hot. I love him taking control and impregnating her. He is correct that men are dominant over women. While not approving of rape, many women secretly desire for their men to assert themselves. It enhances her submissiveness, allowing her the freedom to be totally female. Please continue the story!

i hope there are more chapters to come and after she is pregnant and gets bigger she has to wear maternity pantyhose to work and when he see her in them he takes her through them very hard and rough

I think they're going to fall in love..he's hot and probably super rich.

Seriously this is a perfect story line. Love this. More details on his take on sex. Maybe a paragraph from HIS view.

freaken awesome! Write more!

Ooohhhh nice nice nice!

XD Is he like, not human? If not, how does he know that the test would be negative? Hope this will be a full story that won't be abandoned, hehe. Kind of frustrating when that happens. I like the story so far! Please update more often.

Hoping for another chapter of this great story. Thanks.

i'm reading literotica for some time now, and this is definitely the best story i've read, and i'm not so much into the novel stories. but this one.. i feel i could enjoy the next 100 chapters of this fabulous story!

can't wait for chapter 4!

Good read, I can feel all her turmoil and emotions. I felt connected to the story from the beginning, and now I learn that we share the same name... It would be creepy if it wasn't so hot! :)

This series so far is the best I have read in a while! Please write #4 soon!

Would be cool to have a number four chapter, well done.

the story is hot, and the writing is very good... however, may I point out that a one inch thick cock is very, very thin... 2.5 inches and above is a nice thick cock!!!

To the previous commenter a chapter or so back... A very long cock will go into the womb if the man knows what he is doing... had it happen to me once a long time ago, so I know!

Thank you for the beautiful story!

I suffered a stroke a year ago, reading was a passion before. But now I have struggled. This it the first to,e I have been able to keep on reading. It has completely captured me!

Jojo

I don't mean to embarrass you but you need to watch some online porn to see what a "horse cock" looks like! Or even browse an adult toy store. The standard size vibrator that most every woman starts with is exactly the dimensions you described... 7 ins. long by 1&1/2 in. wide.

Hmmm Interesting that he has the belief that the Reason from women is to bred by men and impregnated bearing their children. I wish more countries encouraged the raising of children as so often it is the less fortunate and stupid ones who bear lots of kids like welfare momma's who pump them out so they can increase their benefits as they simply ignore the ones they sire. Ironic how black men chase after white women but rarely get them pregnant and yet black whores are on every corner using no birth control and as they have been taught and programmed by their men they accept no rubbers. So ironically Black women end up delivering white men's babies and half the time they don't even know who the father is. I had a young one as a slave although she thought she was getting over as she was getting free rent from one of my many rentals; but i was getting free use of her body whenever i wanted and the more i fucked and screwed her the more she wanted. She was so horny she would even go with me to sex clubs in order to entice me and turn me on inciting a little "Race play" that she especially liked to perform in the "Exhibitionist / Voyeur Room" as some thought her calling me "Master" was a sexual Dominance thing while others were obviously super turned on and would chase after me later in the club questioning how i was able to get a "Black Slave Girl" (envisions of Southern civil war days even though we are in the North). She would claim it was to turn others on as she thought getting the free rent and being taken out to eat, treated well etc was wonderful and the least she could do was give me some pussy in return. But i knew from the day she smiled slyly at me asking me if the rent was negotiable that she was willing to be as submissive as i wanted as she then dropped to her knees asking if she could put a down payment on "the deposit". And every time i brought over new toys including bondage gear she was like a kid in a candy store eager to try it out as she knew her bed was going to be soaked afterwards. Unlike his story i in fact was adamant to have her take her birth control as i didn't want to ruin her perfect little body and have a lifetime of payments. What ended it for me is not her confessing her Love for me after a few months but her constant pleading to get married. I enjoyed the yea and half i had her as my chocolate "sugar baby slavegirl" and the only sad part is she ended up married with 2 kids before she found out her loser husband was a criminal who wanted to lay about and no work and live off her welfare monies to the point he even suggested they stay together but get a divorce so she could continue getting more welfare and aid. She called me pleading for help and while i listened out of respect for our time together I knew that by giving her some money was going to be the last time i saw her. Today as i get older I now see women who have a variety of things, situations, drams, problems, mental and emotional issues some brought on by themselves and others caused by their bad choices as now i am the one being pursed as I became even more successful. Although Now I am more selective in finding just the right submissive to fill my life and not just my bed. And with experience I have also developed some very special skills; as women seem to think they have the Power because they control who goes in their pussy; but it is I who have the control as to "How much pleasure that pussy has" and I jokingly say all i need is a few hours and she will be a devotee within that time, so with power comes responsibility. Because the last one i didn't make sure to fully let her know what i had done to her became such a wanton slut going from man to man and sometimes several at a time in search of one that made her squirt as much as i had and give her 1-2 Dozen Orgasms in a session where sadly even like the stud in the story most men are stupid and just interested in getting off and never realizing by holding back and having her go insane with lust then she will do ANYTHING to have it happen again and if she has it happen on a regular basis then she can be like a drug addict searching for the next big high. And if the man is typical no matter his looks then she is left while not completely unsatisfied she will Always remember her Master Pipelsinger172@aol.com who made her body literally vibrate and tingle for hours long after being in bed.

“Had I been a neutral observer, I would have laughed at the absurdity of this situation. I was arguing in favour of feminism with a rapist, WHILE he was raping me.” Literally made me laugh out loud. I love the unique perspective of this story. Good work.

"rape IS sex, and sex is what makes women subordinate, not inferior, to men." This is so true. I love that her body knew before her that this is sex and she is fortunate to be fucked so well. Love the story.