All Comments on 'Intruder Ch. 13'

I commented yesterday night in hopes of reading something from you soon. Little did i know ill be the first reader in the morning!

Honestly, it might have been best if you just left in open-ended because this ending sucks when compared to the rrest of the series.

So…you think it "sucks" that John became husband and father (a decent human being) instead of going round continuing to be a deadbeat rapist? Thanks for that insight into your thinking.

ending is nice would have been cool if he has all sons instead and trained them into a milf-loving hit squad

I liked it. Thank you for finishing.

thank you for the great ending of this series. i loved it and liked it when john took her through her pantyhose

I'm glad you finished, and I loved the ending. I'm happy that you turned John into a Decent Man, and a Loving and Caring Husband, and Father.

So StealthBreeder?:))the woman having baby after baby of the rapist is remedy for rape?!;))you are priceless!! ;)) why not pass your bright solution to anti rape cells of police stations?!;))would save them lotsa useless investigating!! ;))

Thank you so much for finishing the story. I think is priceless that thus far he only has girls! I wonder how far they will make it through the alphabet.

Would be another thug threatening her in some way and his socipathic protection mode come out strongly.

I have loved this series of yours. Please write some more on similar situations where love happens eventually.

I know it sounds deranged but then it is fictional.

A rapist is a rapist, but only if the rapee (?) acts as though it's rape. Over time the rapist is transformed into a loving, caring father. Well done!

Would be just deserts if when his kids are grown and there is a son somewhere in the bunch of his 54 kids who does the same to his daughters and wife.

Too many things left unanswered. Like what happened to Dean? Who was Katherine a.k.a. Kitty? And why was one of their girls named Catherine? Why did he resort to having sex with Kitty? The ending was too rushed with too many loose ends. NOT happy!!

Everyone is always unhappy with endings and the way the story goes if the anonymous readers have so much complaints why don't they try the harsh task of writing something the way they want it and put up with other people's anonymous nasty comments

Love this story but have mixed feelings. I wanted her to end up with John, but also wanted him to own up to how wrong he was to ruin so many lives. Fifty plus fatherless children is not something to be brushed aside. Leah as she comments, ended up with the rape offering her a life she could never imagined due to his wealth. She was intelligent, successful and had a plan to become a doctor in the beginning. As a woman who seemed independent, by the end she was a possession who gave him everything he wanted. Babies every 9 months??? Guess as a rape survivor it is hard to see how he comes out on top. It stays with the victim for the rest of her life, even without the burden of a child.

Ultimately it is fantasy fiction and was a great story. Keep up the good writing.

and I loved it, regardless of the taboo related to the act. Thank you.

I really enjoyed your story, the sex was hot, the emotion was surprisingly deep, and I was hooked by chapter 1. Thanks for a great read StealthBreeder.

Would of been interesting for rapist to know make amends by mailing $ 500,000 check to each of the women he raped to help raise the kids

I love the whole story from part 1, you the writer have really outdone yourself. This story was both sexy, beastly, and everything that goes with the sexy intruder. I loved every moment of it, and I hope you come out with others. I can't wait to read them. I kid you not, I literally stayed up all night reading the stories, and I love them. I wish men like the Intruder in the story, was actually real, Without the raping part LOL. But nothing wrong with the fantasy thought of it all. Everyone has fantasies, and that's what makes sex so great. Anyways, thank you for writing such great stories. I also write stories like these, but they've never been published. Thank you

I wish you wrote another one like this

Loved the story well done👍

Enjoyed the story despite the nature of it. Sad it ended but still worth reading. Sparked me on some levels and not on other levels. Despite that it was definitely worth reading….. didn’t care much for the California bit and truly wanted to skip but couldn’t because it would have bugged me not to know. Plus there were developments in it as far as “the intruder” was concerned. Still worth reading and would possibly read again.

Wish these thoughts could have cycled back to what he said about Zoe from California needing a father not a rapist.

I like to believe that dean somehow died “mysteriously” but I know it’s because the author completely forgot about it.

Brava, dear writer. I loved this story and the characters. It is well written and well developed. I want more from you!

This was such a good story. I really dont like to read long stories but this i had to!