All Comments on 'Intruders'

Sick and twisted

Awesome! Would love to see Dan return and then for them to fall in love! Having a relationship of domination, reason why she falls for him eventually after many nights of intruding and nonconsentual sex. Can't wait to see your follow up! Great writing!

I truly loved this story. So erotic when they both poured their seed into her. I will be reading this again soon...over and over.

-justin

I would love to set this up for my wife. I know she would love it. I believe she wants it to happen. I have blindfolded her before and pretended to "take" her. And she has had some very powerful climaxs. More!!!

Short but intense...i liked

Intense...excellent