All Comments on 'Intrusion'

Ashson at his best. Doubt that it ranks highly in the list of all-time great literature, but who cares.

Great work Ashson, I look forward to the next part hopefully. :)

I know you don't usually write multipart stories, but this one deserves at least one, probably two

Maybe the description could've been clearer; because the story took a *while* to get to the point where we male ass-rape aficionados realize we're in the wrong aisle.

One of your better stories. Much more interesting than your other scenes. Fanciful, but a good read, even though not erotic

i 100% agree with bigdnc13.. this story needs a least one more chapter, preferably 2! thanx ashson for your thoroughly enjoyable stories!

Hehehe! Sorry, but at the beginning I was thinking along the same lines as the male ass-rape aficionado. That you had possibly gone loopy and confused the sexes when doing the draft. Except bum-plumbing never entered the fantasy reeling in my head. I'm sure it would have been something well worth reading, if a male was indeed the intended recipient of the molestation. Damn. He would have been quite exhausted.

Shot for crazy story!

This story took forever to read. I had trouble keeping awake.

Huh? Where did that come from?