All Comments on 'Invaders'

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canndcanndalmost 14 years ago

Great story! Really imaginative. I like the ending. I figured it was the stuff the smoke making her oversexed. Good twist. Thanks for writing.

canndcanndalmost 14 years ago

one question...why didn't the sex they had in the car convert him?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
OH MY GOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Holly shit dude! This is one of the most intence sex stories I have read in a while. THANK YOU.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
verryy ggoooddd

great story, dude. the structure of some sentences was confusing. the jumping of time tracks was very confusing, but over all delicious!. looking forward to more stories.

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