All Comments on 'Invasions Ch.02'

by Kimaari

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baikalisanbaikalisanalmost 10 years ago
Interesting

So far so good. Tho I'd like longer chapters if you could :)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Well done!

I like how you have set this up! I look forward to later chapters!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago

Confusing really. If it were up to me they wouldn't teach her to fight just how to have sex and pop babes out. I know call me sexist but that's the kind of survival story I like to read. Like The Prestest or Slave of the Servants. This one has promise though

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