All Comments on 'Invisible Hands'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Nice one

Expand on this, please.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Great story

I liked this story and look forward for a next chapter.

This plot and these characters, the scientist and the two assistants, have a lot of potentialities and I personally think it's worth developing.

What about a test of the elixir "on the road"?

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Amazing

Wonderful story. I definitely hope you follow this up with another chapter!

James7594James7594almost 7 years ago
"...penis hit the office chair..."

I was laughing so hard at "...penis hit the office chair..." part!!! It was so ridiculous!!! This should be in some funny stories site! not literotica!!! God I can't stop laughing!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Next Chapter Please

Please continue this story, it's amazing!!!

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