All Comments on 'Invisible Man'

"even the kids in their 'rice rocket' import cars came up ask him questions." - Either she or the author are mixing two different slang terms. "Crotch rockets" are a type of fast motorcycles. "Rice burners" is a derogatory name for Japanese cars.

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"While it is true the best thing I could make in the kitchen was restaurant reservations with my phone" - Reminds me of a joke, told by Jews, so it's not anti-semitic: What do JAPS (Jewish American Princesses make for dinner? Reservations.

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"No Mom, but my marriage was in a bad place" - Who put it there?

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"it really pissed me off that she had hurt Dad." - Hypocrite much?

1973 Mark IV Lincoln Continental, had one. Triple black. Damn nice car.

Yes to all the naysayers. There are typos and grammatical errors. So what! Damn good story and funny in spots.

★★★★★

Searching author list to see if he has posted the second part. By far a story whose author does not rely on flights of fancy for plot development.

Good story. Gets better.

He is the biggest asshole coward ever written in LW. Great job bringing him below pond scum. Always love your stories and appreciate your excellent writing. Hope you are still around and happy. We are getting old quickly hahah