All Comments on 'Invitation To Dinner'

Good story!! Will we have another telling her to come over and see the film they made? Is she theirs now?

Nice story. Personally I like this type of stuff with her hopefully becoming a slave in chapter two - hint, hint! also I couldn't fault the writing.

Yep, definitely deserves a sequel!

Loved the story, well written and graphic. Would like to see some from her perspective though.

Especially the bull, and the "dirty maid", poor dear didn't get to get any of her own. I try to read a little in every genre and your work has always been interesting.

I liked that a lot especially the bull you commented on it hitting cervix maybe. in another chapter they could change the dildo fatter or longer opening it up. can't fault the writing. xx

I bet you're a phenomenal lover.

I almost wish I was the housewife.

Good ome.

O'oops, that should read " good one ".

I haven't read quite this story line before. It's a good one. The bad spelling detracts from it, however, lowering the rating in my opinion.

Loved this. Your definitely the best :-)

Enjoyed this story and would like to see more .

I like the story alot

Things progressed a little too fast for my liking though.

I would like to see the details fleshed out a little.

Overall though, a good story.

Worth the read.