All Comments on 'Ioana Musca Ch. 04'

Seriously, it does. A lot of mistakes I saw, i.e. uses of "her" when it should of been "him," some grammar errors, spelling, etc. But aside from those errors, a good job. Interesting story, well worth the effort to fix.

KEEP GOING I WANT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS!!!!!!!

I'm really enjoying this story! Please do keep writing. You've really grabbed and held my attention, which is not such an easy thing to do. Keep going!

You have, have, HAVE to continue! ON THE LOOKOUT.

It's very good. Why haven't you continued it. I'm at the edge of my seat here, what happens next? PLEASE continue it. Don't stop!

Please I fell in love with this series and I can't stand being left hanging in suspense. Please, please finish it! Very nicely written!

So I had a lot of comments about the rushed style of writing and started to re-write and then never went anywhere. Here I am in 2013 realizing that I never posted the last chapter because I was trying to fix something that wasn't even supposed to be a proper story. I merely wanted to pen down my dream and give it some life, so it stands as it is, with all kinds of flaws which I don't have the mind frame to go over. I hope you can skip the flaws and see the characters and their growth through this story. I wish people didn't write as anonymous, I figured I owe it to them to finally tell them I finished it up...but I dont know who you are to tell you. Sorry