All Comments on 'Iram Draconis Ch. 01'

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kiwiplumkiwiplumover 10 years ago
suggestion

Perhaps would have been a bit more exciting if you'd given the priestess a bit of character, had her resentful, not acquiesced quite so quickly? But perhaps you have something else in mind,I'll read on.

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