All Comments on 'IRC - When Predator Becomes Prey'

by drkfetyshnyghts

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jkimjkimover 14 years ago
so long

gyrl wishes this had been posted in 6 - 12 different segments...overwhelming as it is...

bdsmfetish666bdsmfetish666over 12 years ago
the story of stephanie

This story is quite good as I gave it 4 stars, but I thought it was a bit long winded at times. The story tends to repeat itself and had too much build up and not enough of the bondage and bdsm, fetish, and training torture.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Less is more

Way, way too long. Too many errors. Cardboard characters. Don't bother to continue.

This was bad enough as it is.

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