by drkfetyshnyghts
gyrl wishes this had been posted in 6 - 12 different segments...overwhelming as it is...
This story is quite good as I gave it 4 stars, but I thought it was a bit long winded at times. The story tends to repeat itself and had too much build up and not enough of the bondage and bdsm, fetish, and training torture.
Way, way too long. Too many errors. Cardboard characters. Don't bother to continue.
This was bad enough as it is.