All Comments on 'Irish Eyes'

Very good story. Loved both ladies and I hope that I see more of your work soon.

So very good with lots of yummy parts too! I hope there's more! Thank you!

Why leave us pondering what you have in store. When you implied there was more to tell. Please reveal the future. This tidbit earns 5🌟's

I don't know how, Shaima, but I must have missed this one when it first came out. Still, I've found it now so all's well with the world. An enjoyable little tale, five stars worth of enjoyable.

Patient development. Quite nce!

Clumsy,

The urgency of the situation, the clumsiness of the characters, and the clumsiness of the writing, all worked together in an unexpected whole that would have been less if any one of those was omitted.

Unexpected.

Wait ... I'll get back to you in a minute ...

Reread again, just now.

Outstandingly complicated. I was going to complain about the ambiguous she/her usage again, but changed my mind. That confusion coupled with all the complex little movements, looks, and touches plays together perfectly, forcing me to reread paragraphs as many as five times to get it all straight. It's like a complex game, getting it all straight, putting me in the center of everything.

I don't think I could write something like that intentionally, and of course I wonder if you did, the gestalt was magnificent, for such a short dense piece.

This was a piece of art where the flaws were part and parcel of the work.