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by Razvan369

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jonmartin22jonmartin22about 14 years ago
marvelous..

Makes me want to sink my fangs into something.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

loved it, great idea 4 the POV

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago

A nice story, though you could use an editor before you post.

You have an annoying tendency to leave off the last letter of words. Also, it's writhe not wither, descent not decent, and scrape not scrap.

Good luck with your writing.

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