by geronimo_appleby
Had to give this a rare 5. It made me laugh. Delightfully perverse. Nice to be surprised once in awhile. And you are a wonderful writer.
Excellent! Made me hard as a rock, especially since you wrote it from James' perspective. The unexpected twist totally surprised me; however, it really emphasized how low James had sunk. You should definitely try your hand at a third gay story
I find this story very hot because it is 'forbidden', It really made me so hard I ended up jacking off before I finished reading it. A true erotica.
One of the very best stories. I also found it was enhanced because you told it from James' POV instead of Simon's.
I wish you would write a second story with the same cast of characters. There's so much I want to know about Clara and Cassandra....
And so real The husband describes how I feel 100%
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It goes without saying that geronimo_appleby is an excellent writer.
What I think you do really well is to capture the hunger, the yearning, the intensity.....