by Dexter88
Congratulations on your first story. Well-written and maintaining the interest all the way through.
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The story is hot and maintains interest. Definitely has potential for additional chapters. She could move home and............
From Top to bottom, NOTHING was boring. Very well written. You seem to know a lot about a woman's anatomy. that's nice!!
Very enjoyable read!! I couldn't help myself, the combination of the story while looking at my favorite pic of my SD put me over the edge!!