All Comments on 'Isabella Awakening Ch. 03'

very well written and paced out...kept my curiosity very piqued. please continue

If you are going to set your story aboard a ship, please learn the correct terminology.

The 'very back of the ship' is the 'stern'. The sharp bit up front is the 'bow'.

Fair enough comment, thanks. If I ever rewrite it I'll be sure to consult appropriate texts.

Too many typos