by Paul T
Loving this story so far. I'm not one to comment often, but this one needed at least a few words. I'm hungerly awaiting the next installment.
how have you not finished this story? your plot and characters are fantastic, the writing is good and enjoyable...i just read it from the first chapter to the last, but i'm left wanting more. please continue this, you cannot leave things like that! i have to know what delicious thing you've got planned for the next chapter!