All Comments on 'Island'

Huh, I find it a little hard to believe that he wouldn't recognize the woman as Maribel, and Maribel's actions are kinda confusing as well. That said, it was a very cute story and even amusing. Very cool.

With a Capital C. Promised much, produced nothing

That many people in a plane small enough to land in a parking lot? Right.

They landed in a parking lot on a deserted island? Doesn't fit. Stacy and Mark were separated from the group for that long a time? Doesn't work. Stacy says Mark and Maribel were killed, but how did that happen? If it happened? The writing is good, the story less so. It either needs revision or a second part that ties the loose threads together.

This was amazing.I am smarter than the others because I got the story.A jumper plane (can hold up to 20 people,depending on size,all jumpers are small though) could land in a big parking lot,say a walmart superstore parking lot or a school parking lot.Obviously these other reviewers have an IQ of 50 or below.I personally thought it was great!

Never drunk-write during a 'lost' marathon.

Erm, why would there be a Parking Lot on a deserted island?

What was there to park in it?

I laughed for 5 minutes after I realized "jungle girl" was Maribel. Way to go.