by YKN4949
Not one of your better works, the story dragged on too long and the sex scenes weren't well built. Ending was pretty moronic.
every time i see a new story of you shine with a little, yellow N letter, my heart skips a beat and i think to myself "this is gonna be good :D "
and it always is
now this one was a bit shorter, compared to most others and to be perfectly honest it wasn't as great as i expected, but still good nonetheless :)
and i kinda have to agree with first anon about the ending, i was kind of hoping that mom would join in or that you'd hint that she would later on, not that they'd run away from her (it's kinda bitchy)
but anyway, this story was still a privilege to ... "read" and as always i will be looking forward to more :)
(no pressure <3)
I love the series man, so awesome, I'd love to read some more on the miller family ;). Keep up the great work.
adding these to your story?
-Twins
-Mutual Penetration
-Self Penetration
-Public Orgy
-Futa Family Orgy
This child will eventually miss her mother, errr, Mother #2..............Eileen, while experiencing a little guilt. After all, Eileen did raise, as well as sacrifice time and money. What may have seemed like a good idea--at the time, well, regrets will surface. Aynsley should know better, and is indebted to her sister. I think that Kendal will experience a little remorse.
Nevertheless, it's still a very good story I hope Kendal recovers, and spends her final two-three years in High School taking advantage of eventual popularity. Hell, I wish I had 10-inches when I was in High School.
Once again, scenes finish before they can even start. It’s almost like you didn’t know how to properly write a full-blown sex scene, so you just finished it before things even got off the ground. A 3.5 inch dick is basically micropenis territory and I don’t buy the fact that just because a girl is a virgin, a dick that small is more appropriate for her. Let’s not even talk about the ending, where logic is seemingly completely abandoned. Ugh. 2/5
I disagree with the comments about it all going too fast. I love the paccing. The evocations of the sex are excellent. I am your most ardent fan. Norma Jane.