All Comments on 'Island Love'

full of humour and romance.

Loved the pacing, the humor-everything about it!

was a great kiwi story even with the few typo's was able to read between the lines...kia ora bro thanks again for great story......has it got a follow up?

When I saw your name as the author I knew it would be a good read. Your handling of the NZ vs USA attitude was full of good humor. This was very pleasurable reading all the way thru. Thank You for a pleasurable hour of reading.

I felt that the "kiwi male" stuff, although typical, was a bit overdone. Also Dora talked more like a snotty Pom than an American. Quite a few typos - "Greenland" off the GS Road? Nah. Maybe you've got autocorrect switched on? Otherwise a really good read. Keep it up.

This yarn is slightly reminiscent of old Crumpy. Good humour and over-stated characters. Damn good.

Early on you have a fundamentals error, one is not "formerly" dressed (unless you mean once, in the past), but "formally" dressed, as in wearing a tuxedo.