All Comments on 'Island Secrets Ch. 05 - Finale'

Just a comment to say I enjoyed your story

I thought it was well written

I could nit pick but why? it is fine as it is - well done and write more

Your encouragement is greatly appreciated.

5* for each of 5 chapters and a positive anon comment on each from me.

I have to say this is the first novella I've managed to get past the first chapter and certainly the first time I've read this many chapters of a story in one go. I've been here for 5 years and now proudly add you as my forth author to follow.

Thank you.

As Kelteriser says; a smattering of errors but far fewer than in my work and nothing that spoilt your story.

Thank you everyone. I have been on hiatus for far too long and months have turned into years. I will hopefully have new material in the coming year.