All Comments on 'Island Slave Ch. 02'

please please write the next installment of this story fast i need to know what happens please i am begging u pls

I am sorry, I really like a lot of your stories, but this one is just not "clicking" with me. Her imprisonment is just too far fetched for me to buy into it. Keep writing and I will keep reading, just not this one.

I am enjoying! Please continue to write this story. Looking forward to next chapter!

This story is, may I say: Captivating. It hooked me. I can't wait for the next chapter.

you started off so good but after chapter one it just went down hill. it just doesn't flow. they should have had a nice romance together instead of rape, fetish, kidnapping and non-human nonsense. its just too much and not a good example to first time readers of your work.

I found the story well thought out and interesting. I'd like to know what story the other commentor read because I didn't see anything that could have been remotely paranormal.

I really enjoyed this story and found it well thought out and written. I am very impressed with your premise and hope to read more soon. Thanks for posting and don't let someone else intimidate or keep you from posting. Great job!

So delicious how he makes her need him and then ask him to fuck her...

It’s pre bizarre that she freaked out with Harold ensuring safe sex even to the point of a condom blow job (yuk!) but with Quinn she doesn’t care?

She seems to be very attracted to him unless it’s just a case of Stockholm Syndrome? Overall it’s an entirely weird situation.

The expression is "Free rein", as in 'letting a horse run uncontrolled', not 'letting the royalty out'