All Comments on 'Islanders'

What a sweet tale and unless you are a conning writer you must have visited Isle of Wright at some point since that was pretty much spot on.

Many thanks for sharing.

Well Done.........

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Thanks...........................

One of the best reads yet! Hope there is more to come as I absolutely loved your style. The setting - the Isle of Wight intrigued me further as it’s of my concealed ancestry.

pretty stupid, wasn't he? What a shame... all the lost years.

Your gifted composition abilities shown here will lead you on to higher areas.

16 years is a very long stretch in time; how can someone live separated from his/her loved ones over such a long gap?For God sake they both were on this earth not on some distant planets, they could have gone to meet each other in today's age of faster effective mode of communications.

Thank you.

...that you have numbered among your readers those who understand the ways of a life, and see that though something can be done about everything, life isn't like fantasies and dreams. This is a delightful story, full of the pathos of life and the purity of love, full of patience and passion. I loved it when you sent it for me to edit for you, and I love it now! Five stars, Demure!

A well crafted tale about two lovers who could really be called loving, as said previously, it could go over the heads of some who can't accept the concept of long term commitment, or of commitment to family taking precedence over all else, but in the real world, it happens. Well done

seperate them and live on the promises, TK U MLJ LV NV

This story was nicely written but there are flaws that bother me in the content. Why sixteen years?? In love sixteen minutes can be an eternity! This aspect to this story needs to be reconsidered. Perhaps, visits phone conversation and the likes need to be inputed. Other then that a nice story with flawless editing. Kudos to your Editor as well!

I know this story is 2 years old, but I read it now the second time and it seems only to be more beautiful with rereading.

I hope you read this.

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Thank for sharing your delightful stories with us.

a lovely story of enduring love

It's too bad he didn't convince his dad to go "home" with him after mum died

... and beautifully done. Thank you.

And I disagree with the wasted-years school of thought shown here. If she'd moved to Wight, she at least thought she would be unhappy. Meeting occasionally would have just made it harder to part each time--and money would have been a problem.