by Winterfrog
I felt falling for Abbey was too rushed but overall it was a good story.
I gave a high rating because I find these stories so entertaining. Winterfrog has a formula for stories that seems to work and this one is true to the formula. It is so totally amazing that there are so many women who will, after being found out, continue with their adulterous behavior as though there will be no consequences.
To think, stories by Winterfrog and HDK on the same day. It doesn't get better than this.
But what the hell, I like his stories. They are always different from most loving wife stories, and that can only be a good thing.
I find it farfetched that any happily married woman could imagine that her husband would let her go off for a week (!) to a resort with another man, let alone a horny old boyfriend who's already vowed to fuck her. If she had her husband that far under her thumb, then he wasn't the man we see in the rest of the story. On the other hand, if the husband saw this Capri trip as an opportunity to dump a wife he didn't want to be married to any longer, then Winterfrog might have made that a bit more clear. Either way, to me it's a flawed story although still a very enjoyable one. Thanks, ohio
Winterfrog has created a niche and never fails to deliver...
Living well is the best revenge. Basically he was unhappy with his wife and she gave him an opportunity to solve all his problems! Thanks for the story.
It's just too bad he couldn't have gotten rid of that slut Sandra sooner in his life, he would have saved himself a lot of money. I wonder why he didn't sue Jeff for alienation of affection and pounded his bank account for all he could get from the arrogant bastard. It's guys like him that you would like to remove his nuts beyond his navel.
You still need to have someone edit your stories so that readers can read your stories in English. You have been told so many times by so many people and yet your inflated ego still persists in writing this crap. Wake up and get yourself a good "English" editor.
Winterfrog your stories are perfect. Written in the dialect of your native country which is what makes them unique. Don't change and most certainly do not get a so-called ENGLISH editor.
It is a treat to have both an HDK and a Winterfrog story posted today. WF, please ignore anon's stupid comments. Your English is good. Don't change a thing. I really appreciate each story that you write.
I am not convinced that putting Winterfrog's stories into correct English phrases would enhance the story. As Ohio has pointed out...most of these stories are flawed to us yet we don't mind because they are written with a different ideology or level of thinking than ours. If written correctly, even more readers would not accept such thinking or the actions of these characters.
This is quite a eventful story--too much so, to my mind. There's much plot without much character development.
Sometimes less is more; sometimes not. Three stars.
Kudos ! This story is an example of that concept & the payback for her mendacity makes this story one of my personal favorites.
...the shit have hit the fan. Therefore---- 1* !
the damn pussy hound got his balls kicked - therefore, no vote!
My only disappointment is that nowhere in the story have shit hit the fan .
Well, you cannot have everything. 4 stars.
In the first marriage there was no give and take, only the wife working to get her way without any compromise. The presence of give and take compromise with the new wife bodes well for that marriage.
He found out warned her took adequate revenge and moved on
He told her not to go. But she went anyway and now she is done. The Frog don't play.
A wife does not go off for a vacation with another man, no matter how grand the venue might be. No promise offsets that. I wish I thought this was all fiction, but it does happen. Interesting story.
Just wow. This is your first story that I have read where the wimp didn't take the slut back. Someone must have slipped some male hormones into your drink when you wrote this one. A rarity indeed for the Scandi Cuck Prince.
Funny as usual although this plot idea seems to be repeating in WF stories. Time for something new.
Obviously hubby didn’t love his wife and used her stupidity to cheat and dump her. She better off without him. Once a cheater, he new wife Anne will never be faithful nor will he.
Please! Have someone who understands english as a first language proofread before publishing. Reading the bad grammar was quite painful.
4 stars for a husband with a spine. However, some of the sentences were unusually rough to read, even for WinterFrog. A week vacation by herself with another man, an ex-fiance who claims his wife is all good with it, not to mention a known horndog, is laughable for Sandra to think she would be able to skate by with her promises of no sex. Besides though he blew it up easily, and could have stopped it with a divirce ultimatum, he actually wanted a divorce also because of crap she had pulled earlier in the marriage. She was both stupid and drawing dead. While these scenarios make for dramatic tension, I have to belive these are rare. More common scenario is lie about going somewhere else with say some girlfriends and then trying to get away with it. However, with a small child, her having no significant job (meaning no conventions or conferences), and it being for a week, even that would be hard to pull off unless enlist multiple people in a conspiracy, which would probably fall apart afterwards at some juncture.
Very cute fantasy, but I just find it incredibly hard to belive that the MC could be both the morally upstanding one and fall in love with a new woman who he's known for a long while. Maybe he had cheated previously, maybe not. But long lasting relationships rarely firm that quickly.