All Comments on 'Isolated in Silk'

by Chernobog3

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orchard264orchard264almost 11 years ago
Interesting

A very interesting story which, with a little bit of editing, could be much improved. Your use of the English language is somewhat lacking in polish.

However, the story idea is great and could stand another chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Great development

You must hurry with chapter 2!!

DiannahDiannahalmost 11 years ago
4 stars

An excellent start! A very creative story idea that kept my attention.

Chernobog3Chernobog3about 9 years agoAuthor
If you liked this story...

There's a polished spin off of the Isolated in Silk scenario with a brand new story to be read on Amazon. Enjoy!

http://www.amazon.com/dp/B00WUYM480

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