by Chernobog3
A very interesting story which, with a little bit of editing, could be much improved. Your use of the English language is somewhat lacking in polish.
However, the story idea is great and could stand another chapter.
An excellent start! A very creative story idea that kept my attention.
There's a polished spin off of the Isolated in Silk scenario with a brand new story to be read on Amazon. Enjoy!
http://www.amazon.com/dp/B00WUYM480