by jack_straw
what a wonderfiul well written well crafted quiet story. I am very happy I spent the time on this early Monday morning to read this. Great great story
This was an EXCELLENT story. The characters had appeal and were developed just enough to get the flavor of their personalities and lives. I was really able to get into it. These two REALLY love each other, and it showed. Kudos on a job well done!
This is a true Loving Wife. I don't care what anyone else thinks, this is the very definitin of love.
Thank you for your Story. It shed a little light on my current situation.
This is, truly, a lovely piece of writing. 'Nuff said.
-- KK in Texas
Jack you have always written well and produced some great stories, but this is the best ever! Great characters and a flow that just drew me in, perfect!
This was a very touching story, I could almost see the story play out as I read it. BRAVO!!!!
with a touch of sweetness and more than a hint of reality.
This story should help a lot of authors (and readers) understand that passion is about love, not sex.
Great read - that's what it's all about!
Regards, Jack
You have me wondering about his heart attack. I had 100% blockage along with a 70% and 50% but I did not have a heart attack. The capilliaries took over for the artery and when they looked into the matter the flow before and after the blockage was equalized. They did bypass it when they did the other two but it was not really necessary.
Bryn Mar has a very reasonable scholary sector. Their chemistry department had extremely good people and they produced excellent future Ph.D's. I admit that they had I lot of highly social girls but it was not a place were serious people could not live!
I really appreciated the warmth of this story. If every man and woman could find their soul mates like these two have there would be no cheating wife stories, no divorce court and a lot more well adjusted children in the world. Thank you for writing such a moving story.
Charley
Well-written; a great deal of "realness," which I like. Finely balanced and sweet romance, with a smattering of hot sex. Thanks.
Thanks for your story, I really enjoyed it.Life is hard, but with the right person, it's all more than worth it.Keep writing!
What a lovely story! I enjoyed it immensely. Thank you for all the time, energy and talent you put into your writing and into entertaining your readers. I'm headed back to your site to find some more.
Really enjoyed the story, as usual. Well written, short and sweet.
Loved this story, been the guy in the bed, seeing my wife sitting there on the occasions that I came to, also been the the person sitting next to the bed. A lot more reality than all the gangbangs and cheating spouses. A true Loving Wife
I really enjoyed this story. Now this is a happy ending in a feel-good story. Too bad there aren't many more of this type of story on the Literotica website. They mostly seem to be the "Burn the bitch/dick story". Or even worse the "My wife is a whore and I love it" type of story.
This is a great story about a wonderful loving and very real couple. Thank you for sharing this feel good story with the rest of us.
Your talents as a writer are superb. Even though it has been over two years since your last posting on this site, I sincerely hope you consider writing and posting in the near future.
Thank you, again.
This is truly a loving wife who truly loved her husband and her action confirmed that fact. It's nice to read a story without a cheating wife or a wimp husband, well done.
Great to see a story where the spouses love each other..and live it.
So good to read a story about a true loving wife vs. the usual slut, swinger, or cheat that normally populates this category. An excellent read. Thanks for sharing.
This is a loving wife story. Beautiful and pure. I think I love it.
I've lived in the north and the south - they both have their advantages. Met some good people (and at some GREAT southern cooking) in Alabama especially when they realized I planned to stay a while (damn Yankee). Good story Jack. 5 stars
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