All Comments on 'It All Started That Summer'

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whiteasianlvrwhiteasianlvralmost 6 years ago
Powerful

Who would have thought how one night changed everything! Please write more and tell how things evolve among the four men - especially how they treat Cabron now that he's been outed and bred! Great writing! Great Story!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Good first time

Good start, would like to hear more about the 4 of the procede from here. Do that all take turns with his ass? Do the other take a cock too? Please keep going.

Rwa4768Rwa4768almost 6 years ago
More

Great story, I hope you continue this story to let us know what happens with these boys after this night. I have never taken a cock in my ass, but while reading this story I felt my ass craving to be the one getting fucked. I guess someday an a level phase male will take my ass an make me his bitch, I'm already a cocksucker.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Good but needs developement

A good plot but needs more details. There is no way the other guy could sleep thru a good ass fuck and I'd bet they would want to join in the fun.

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