All Comments on 'It Began with Apples'

There was something very arousing about this tale - and this particular story is a HIT as far as I'm concerned!

JR Parz

It was like she woke up one day and found she could fly out of her cage...or into it. Great story.

Good story, well written and intresting conceit.

You are a pretty good writer, however, the story could probably have used one more review before posting.

Mind-control is not for me, I fear. It has to be an inferior man to need to go to such drastic measures to get himself a woman! It´s demeaning and degrading!