All Comments on 'It Begins Ch. 06'

Is Susan a dead-ringer for Kathy, but from a parallel universe? Very confusing.

Also, the correct word would be "insight", not "incite".

who is Susan? Same person different name? Or was that her middle/real name?

You seem to have stopped being careful about proof reading it through, as a lot of mistakes crept into this episode. The previous chapters were written more carefully. Don't spoil it for a lack of attention to detail. Giving it a 4 instead of 5 this time.

Have thoroughly enjoyed the all of the chapters so far and am looking forward to many more. Very interesting scenario. Keep up the good work.

Everything was great until you brought in the rubbers

but who the hell is susan ?

has kathy got two personalities ?

In a series of "fives" I give it a two. Not only did it not progress the story, it was chalked full of errors and hastily written. I didn't even smile let alone become arroused. I've grown to look for your latest chapters, please right the ship.

Who the heck is Susan?

Seriously the "Susan" thing, as well as other very obvious errors, detract from an otherwise great series. Since you've been getting worse with the proofreading, maybe it's time you got someone to do it for you.

I just love this series, it has been a real turn on watching them grow and learn as they have moved from exploration to falling in love.

Is it kathy or susan? wut

loved this ,story is great thou who is Susan? 5 stars from me.

Who in the hell is Susan? And not only that, Michael has kept his promise twice. It's high time for Kathy to get a grip. It's time for Kathy to either go ahead and take a shit or get off the pot. 🤔 Either commit fully to Michael or break it off. This isn't a sexy tease anymore. This is emotional abuse. Pure and simple.