All Comments on 'It Could Be Worse Ch. 08'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago

why did they kill him though? lolol

yourreaderyourreaderabout 8 years ago
What an ending!

Shocking ending, but who has to clean it up? Disposing of the body would be a real buzz kill.

StephanieCDCNJStephanieCDCNJabout 6 years ago
Love the Series Hate the ending

This started off as a great series that was really hot. But for me it went downhill getting the mom involved. The main character getting killed at the end was just unnecessary and sad.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
It's worse

Nonsense. Jim meets up with Leon again and blows his ass away.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
That ending

I'll echo another comment by saying that the series started off great, but just got repetitive after awhile.....and that ending? What the fuck?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
wifey

wife is just a low life piece of shit .

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Feel like throwing up!!!

What the hell his wrong with you

This is the disgusting story I ever overlooked

It hurts my heart that to think about this story

Alpha cock blabla bulshiting to the moon

With a bitch mother a bitch

He himself completely broken I think I would see the end as merci because his live was ended at the Beginn of the story

Never have feel so horrible disgusted after a story

Please help yourself and stop writing such a shit

TrstxxxTrstxxxabout 3 years ago

Series started good. I enjoyed when it got freaky with the mom. Some repetitive...kept on reading though.

And the ending...fucked up and great. Every story can’t end the same. Sometimes you have to fuck with everyone reading. I also may have my fucked up moments 😈

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Strange ending. Would be interesting to know why he was killed. But a follow on chapter with the wife and mother, explaining the hows and whys could be a good conclusion.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

The ending was bullshit. If you do continue the story have it be from the wife. How she immediately realizes she just got her husband killed. Then have her snap out of her bs and kill all the shitheads that contributed to this shit, then have her kill herself.

SNPHLoverSNPHLoverover 1 year ago
Ending makes no sense

The was not context to the ending, who did and and why, what motive.

Couldn’t have ended in a worse way.

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