by eviltwin52
Shocking ending, but who has to clean it up? Disposing of the body would be a real buzz kill.
This started off as a great series that was really hot. But for me it went downhill getting the mom involved. The main character getting killed at the end was just unnecessary and sad.
I'll echo another comment by saying that the series started off great, but just got repetitive after awhile.....and that ending? What the fuck?
What the hell his wrong with you
This is the disgusting story I ever overlooked
It hurts my heart that to think about this story
Alpha cock blabla bulshiting to the moon
With a bitch mother a bitch
He himself completely broken I think I would see the end as merci because his live was ended at the Beginn of the story
Never have feel so horrible disgusted after a story
Please help yourself and stop writing such a shit
Series started good. I enjoyed when it got freaky with the mom. Some repetitive...kept on reading though.
And the ending...fucked up and great. Every story can’t end the same. Sometimes you have to fuck with everyone reading. I also may have my fucked up moments 😈
Strange ending. Would be interesting to know why he was killed. But a follow on chapter with the wife and mother, explaining the hows and whys could be a good conclusion.
The ending was bullshit. If you do continue the story have it be from the wife. How she immediately realizes she just got her husband killed. Then have her snap out of her bs and kill all the shitheads that contributed to this shit, then have her kill herself.
The was not context to the ending, who did and and why, what motive.
Couldn’t have ended in a worse way.