All Comments on 'It Happened in the Night Ch. 04'

Once again an intriguing story. I'm very confused about exactly what is going on which might be frustrating for other readers but I will keep reading. Great writing, no problems there.

Well, I didn't find it confusing as yet, it's shaping up nicely actually. Top notch writing and a wonderful plotline - very well done.

Love the addition of the new character, and I can see them playing of each other very well. Great writing as usual, you never disappoint. And yes, you still scare the shit out of me, but I can't wait for the next chapter!

Loving it so far, but it seems you rushed things a little in chapter 4. It was all well until he met his dad, and then that confrontation blew through in half a second. Then he met the girl, and you just raced through that. I would've liked to see some reaction on his behalf about seeing another living being for the first time in over a week. Also, she seemed much too perky for someone living the same horrors as he has for the past week, and not shocked at all about seeing another person for the first time in over a week as well.

Like I said though, I wouldn't have read this far through all 4 chapters if I didn't love the story.

Eagerly awaiting chapter 5 :D.

it's creepy. Can't wait for more though. Kudos, my friend.